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PLEASE READ THE DESCRIPTION BEFORE COMMENTING THANK YOU

I have been working on this for two days straight.
And i fucking loooove iiiitttt.
Except the background. eeeeeewwwwwww
Anywho, a LONG overdue art trade with :iconquomlon:
She asked me to draw two of her characters and i forgot their accessories im so sorry fffffffffff :C:C:C:C
Plz critique! And please give me tips on how to improve the shitty ass background :D
OOOOOHHHH and im thinking of opening, like, 60 point commissions for stuffs like this, plus 10 for extra character....but i dont know if anyone would be interested lol
Enjoy!
Art: Rhyannyn.B
Characters: ~Quomlon
Check out her amazing half:

I FRICKIN LOVE IIIITTTTTTT :iconepicclapplz:
If you ever want to do an art trade again, just let me know and i promise it wont take me this long next time ;)
AND MAH ART TRADES ARE POSSIBLY OPEN :iconoppaplz:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I like this drawing, I do have a few suggestions for you though. The brown wolf in the front, either he's turning or his body is too short. If he's turning he needs some more shadows or something to indicate it. Both of their legs look too long and since we can't see their feetsies the brown wolf's front legs look way longer than his back legs. Since he's standing on a hill his body should be angled up towards his booty.

On to the stuff I like. Personally I can't draw a background to save my life so I don't really have much to say about yours, I do really like the water though and the night sky, those look really good. I also really like their fluffiness. Aside from his legs being a little long, I really like the back wolf. His colors blend nicely and I think you did a great job on his face.

Vision: I think you had a clear idea of what you wanted, and I think for the most part you got that across.

Originality: Wolf drawings have been done a million times over but I like this one. Its refreshing to see two fairly normal wolves in a fairly normal environment. I think maybe a more engaging pose would help, but for the scene I think it works.

Technique: I like the way you've drawn and colored everything, just the few anatomy critiques from above and maybe something more with the mountains or rocks, I like them but they seem kind of stuck on? I don't know

Impact: I'm not really sure what this is for, so heres my final thoughts. I don't normally click on the drawings that come up from the groups I'm in unless its something that catches my eye. I can't put my finger on what it was that did so, but I do like this drawing and I hope some of this critique has helped <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>